The Explorer

This piece of writing show that I can use capital letters and full stop it also shows I on how to use speech marks.
The thing I found easy about this piece of writing was that I had it written down in my head so I knew exactly what to write.
But the thing I found hard was that I do not know how to spell some really tricky words. I think next time I need to work on: My spelling because it wasn't very good

The raft tipped and I slid. I was cling onto the pole.Con Max and Freda tied to pull me up but at the same time balance the raft out”where are we” i screamed and vomited up water.”we are in the rapier's” said Max trying to pull me up .Slowly they got out of the rapids and it got camera but I was still in the rapids. I slowly drifted out of the rapids. I got up on the raft and vomited up more water.A fire came closer, a tree collapsed like a rotten pole .I hate being in the amazon jungle it is so annoying